The Seventh Veihl

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This sto­ry is part 12 of 12 in the series The Diary of Jack Frazer

Thlop! Smack! Thlop! Smack!  … Thlop! Smack! Thlop! Smack!… SKREEK!…. ….  Thlop! Smack! … Thlop! Smack!…

Remy pon­dered on the immutabil­i­ty of the sounds and won­dered if there were any future, any­where in the uni­verse where the echo of run­ning shoes on an open court could sound any dif­fer­ent.  Sweat poured down from his fore­head, across his chest and shoul­ders, final­ly mak­ing a run­nel down his spine and shak­ing onto the con­crete floor of the tran­scrip­tion print­er cav­ern where it spat­tered in fat droplets behind him as he jogged.

With a thought, Remy enabled the noise-can­cel­ing pro­to­col for the nano-swarm swim­ming in an infi­nite vor­tex embed­ded in his ear canals. An invis­i­ble screen of nanites only a few mol­e­cules thick began absorb­ing vibra­tions microsec­onds before they could reach his eardrums. Polygonal gaps between mol­e­c­u­lar bonds allowed for enough leak­age in oxy­gen to keep his ears from reg­is­ter­ing the pres­sure change as the damp­en­ing bound­ary acti­vat­ed. An instant lat­er, Caleb Followill start­ed wail­ing his sad rever­ie through his brother’s thump­ing foot­print and dri­ving strings in Kings of Leon’s Fairytale, from 2016’s album Walls.  The mol­e­cules on the side of the screen clos­est to Remy’s eardrums vibrat­ed the track in a per­fect re-cre­ation of the per­for­mance, lim­it­ed only by the tech­nol­o­gy that cap­tured it. The music was broad­cast from the cen­tral com­put­er wave­less­ly using a direct kinet­ic pro­to­col that trans­ferred vibra­tional ener­gy across atom­ic hemi­spheres from the host to the user via a vale­ic key.  Central stor­age elim­i­nat­ed the bound­aries cre­at­ed by data stor­age lim­its if embed­ded in the user.

Remy mar­veled at how dif­fi­cult it was to learn to run his morn­ing route from the cen­ter of the music, but the mind adapts quick­ly, and mag­ic becomes mun­dane in forgetfulness.

“2016 was a good year.”

That was a thought.  He rec­og­nized it as his own.  Sometimes it was hard with all the new adap­tive com­mu­ni­ca­tion tech­nol­o­gy he was wear­ing.  A bit of an upgrade in his employ­ment, con­sid­er­ing his tastes.  He vol­un­teered as a tester, and though he was in no posi­tion to nego­ti­ate, Gina had still allowed him to be con­trac­tu­al­ly lim­it­ed to only Max’s tech.  Max’s tech was always non-inva­sive and most­ly aes­thet­ic; qual­i­ty of life enhance­ment and aug­men­ta­tion to a near­ly mys­ti­cal lev­el, no mil­i­tary appli­ca­tion.  That said, hav­ing ears that act­ed like thought-con­trolled AirPod Pros could be quite dis­con­cert­ing.  Godiya’s texts came through as speech with­out tonal con­trol and felt like intru­sive thoughts as often as they didn’t . . . At least they used to . . . The mind adapts.

“The last good year.” Also a thought.  Also his own.

Remy vault­ed over a small couri­er robot car­ry­ing a chunk of tran­script on a roll to an unknown des­ti­na­tion on its track­less grid.  Steel fil­a­ment spread in twist­ing veins across the con­crete floor of the great cav­ern, still unde­fined in dimen­sion.  He had run as far as he could be rea­son­ably assured he could find his way back from, as many as fif­teen miles in a giv­en direc­tion, and had nev­er found the out­er wall.  Masses of stone remained un-trenched and act­ed as bor­ders of cer­tain spaces.  He always found the edge of them and could con­tin­ue in his orig­i­nal direc­tion.  Most often, they were pock­marked with small div­ots, each crammed with some piece of elec­tron­ic equip­ment that he could still not iden­ti­fy. He thought they might be some type of sig­nal repeaters, or per­haps a matrix of sen­sors that com­mu­ni­cat­ed with the nano-hives.  He spec­u­lat­ed often, but researched not at all. Sometimes, it’s best to leave the mag­ic magical.

“And where did he go?”  Not a thought, a memory.

“…and where did he go?” It repeated.

“How long was Max dead when we killed him? And where did he go?” Godiya repeat­ed in his mem­o­ry for the zil­lionth time.

“I don’t know,” Remy thought, “but after all this time, some­body does.” Remy fin­ished and head­ed back to show­er and vis­it Gina.  Sometimes it’s best to know the truth.

He was still car­ry­ing his tow­el when he passed Max’s suite on his way back to his dorm.  He stopped, and the tow­el dropped to the floor with a damp squelch.  His jaw near­ly followed.

The cor­ri­dor fac­ing the walls of Max’s suite was one-way glass; the inte­ri­or side com­prised more of those infi­nite pix­el dis­plays, these pre­tend­ing to be dry­wall.  Through the glass, Remy could see Godiya reclin­ing, a copy of Gibson’s All Tomorrow’s Partiesclasped light­ly between her thumb and fore­fin­ger.  Her ringlets flew in vio­lent arcs around her ears and face as she ges­tured in ani­mat­ed exchange with some­one stand­ing to the oth­er side of the door, which remained incon­ve­nient­ly opaque.  Out of focus, his depth of field unable to com­pen­sate for Godiya’s aggres­sive ges­tic­u­la­tion as she rose, was the very tall, very thin fig­ure of a young man.  Max stared blankly ahead with hands grasp­ing the rails, and feet pis­ton­ing rhyth­mi­cal­ly across the belt of a sim­ple tread­mill. The noise appar­ent in the room wouldn’t have leaked into the cor­ri­dor even with­out his onboard NC, which was idle in the silence that lacked even Remy’s breath.

“He’s awake?”

Both women froze as Remy entered, the heat from their faces a sour cus­tard of thick ener­gy that cloud­ed the room.  He didn’t pause.

“He’s not awake,” Godiya, flat, her eyes fixed on a point just above and to the left of Gina’s head.

“We were just dis­cussing that very top­ic.  He’s not cleared for this”, Gina soft­ly direct­ly into Godiya’s eyes.

“Then why is he in here?”

“I don’t mean to inter­rupt, ma’am”, Remy addressed Gina, “but his eyes are open, his hands are grasp­ing, and he’s… ah, lop­ing? Along a tread­mill? Uhm… that’s why I thought I came in here.”

“I’m glad you believe that, Mr. Ramirez,” she returned to Remy. “He’s in here because I’m about to clear him, which I told him.  He just didn’t hear.  I have NC over­ride.  Sometimes, how­ev­er, it’s not audi­ble. I’m going in.  You show him The Window, then give him what he wants,” she fin­ished to Godiya.

“What does he want?”  Godiya looked at Remy and her cheeks flushed.

“I’m going in to intro­duce Max; you can final­ly intro­duce Remy.”

“To whom shall I intro­duce him, Gina?” Godiya respond­ed, flus­tered but smooth.

“The Gibson, of course,” Gina echoed as the door closed behind her.

Godiya bit her bot­tom lip, smoothed her sculpt­ed skirt, and restored her­self to her full height.

“Right,” she said, “How the hell did she know about that?”

“Maybe Max told her.  You said he was listening.”

“I did, indeed,” Godiya exhaled.

“Max is not awake.  The cen­tral com­put­er is using a VEIL con­nec­tion to dri­ve Max’s body like a robot.  It is the best way to pre­vent mus­cle atro­phy, and though Gina believes Max may need to use that body again soon, since con­trac­tu­al­ly Max isn’t ever leav­ing this facil­i­ty, I believe the ther­a­py car­ries a host of unnec­es­sary risks; not the least of which is death of the body, and while not con­scious that is tech­ni­cal­ly where Max’s con­scious­ness still lives,” all in one breath until her lips were near­ly blue.

“I have expe­ri­enced Max’s death count­less times, Javier Ramirez, though he has not.  I stand vehe­ment­ly opposed to any unnec­es­sary risk where Max is con­cerned.  Death’s sting is a razor that expe­ri­ence does not dull.”  Godiya con­clud­ed, look­ing up from her toes and meet­ing his gaze.

“It is time for your prize, Mr. Ramirez. Follow me.”

Remy fol­lowed Godiya into the suite next door to Max’s.  They left the lanky fig­ure plod­ding along the rotat­ing band, its blank eyes fixed on a glass wall that looked like plaster.

“The sys­tem will dri­ve his body back to bed.  New capa­bil­i­ties came with the last hard­ware upgrade; that’s why Gina drove him away from the school and back to the facil­i­ty in SIM. Max is still there.  Self-iso­lat­ing.  He believes he pos­es a threat to the world around him, and only the facil­i­ty can pro­tect both him and oth­ers from his influence.

“Truth is, Max’s sense of the ‘uncan­ny val­ley’ is over­com­ing his abil­i­ty to stay coher­ent in SIM.  In essence, he’s los­ing his abil­i­ty to dis­tin­guish between what we tell him is real and what we tell him isn’t. So Gina mined Max for some­thing new, and he delivered . . . ” 

Godiya flour­ished Diana White, two arms box­ing a sim­ple grey body-formed con­tour chair on a chrome flange pedestal in the background. 

She con­tin­ued.

“The Window to the Soul,” Godiya purred with feigned mysticism. 

It was remark­ably non-tech­ni­cal look­ing.  The device pre­sent­ed itself as noth­ing more than a formed plas­tic com­pos­ite chair, albeit mil­i­tary grade con­struc­tion was evident.

“This device is the test mod­el for a new sur­veil­lance sys­tem that will take every police and mil­i­tary intel­li­gence oper­a­tor out of the line of fire for­ev­er.  At least, the one we’re test­ing in SIM will.  This one just mir­rors it.  In SIM, a vir­tu­al hive of nano-cams shaped rough­ly like you will stand invis­i­bly in the room with Max when Gina vis­its. The cam­eras are the size of a sin­gle human cell and use nano-rotors to hov­er. They do not shim­mer like in the movies.  They do make Max shiv­er when we pass through him.  When you’re in the chair, the nano-hive can pass not only visu­al, but also the rest of the sen­so­ry data to you using a Verified Electrical Interrupt Leverage sys­tem.  That’s the same way the sys­tem would work in the real world.  An oper­a­tor would sit at The Window and become invis­i­bly tele-present in anoth­er loca­tion, with a cen­tral com­put­er con­trol­ling the hive and relay­ing the data through a VEIL con­nec­tion. Through the VEIL, the oper­a­tor con­trols a hive of just enough mol­e­cules in a shape they instinc­tive­ly know how to manip­u­late that can see, can hear, can smell, can ‘touch,’ can sense pres­sure and tem­per­a­ture, can sense mois­ture, humid­i­ty, can . . .  taste? Could—I don’t know— dip their ‘tongue’ in an onsite operator’s drink to ‘taste’ for poison…”

Outside the chair, Godiya paused and opened her palm. A flat noth­ing extend­ed across the palm of her hand, pre­sent­ing itself as a two-inch by three-inch bio-lumi­nes­cent screen of star­tling clar­i­ty. A scene of a twen­ty-year-old boy sit­ting in a bat­tered La-Z-Boy, throw­ing darts at a line of light beer cans atop a stack of milk crates on the oth­er side of the room unfold­ed as Godiya finished.

“You get video on SIM screens and one-way audio via VEIL. Follow me.

“Proof of method in SIM is accom­plished in the fol­low­ing way.  We have an oper­a­tor in a mock-up of this chair in SIM.  That oper­a­tor is observ­ing Max’s con­ver­sa­tion with Gina, under her orders.  If the tech­nol­o­gy Max the­o­rized works, the oper­a­tor will have the tele-present expe­ri­ence I described to you, the cen­tral com­put­er inside the SIM will process that data and send it back to both the oper­a­tor in the SIM and our real equip­ment here, on the side of the glass Max doesn’t know about. 

“If you’ll kind­ly read my palm,” Godiya grinned, “you’ll see Max’s design works per­fect­ly well.  They usu­al­ly do. Listen in. Gina pushed Max to self-iso­late so she could intro­duce him to some­one new.  Someone no one else can know about.  Someone who could change things.”

She flexed her fin­gers, and the screen snapped to six by nine.  Godiya led Remy through a cor­ri­dor to where an elec­tric cart hummed, wait­ing for them.  She passed her palm over the dash, and the screen snapped onto the sur­face, now view­able to all passengers.

Leaning over, Godiya whis­pered in Remy’s ear, “Are you watch­ing closely?”


Gina thumped down the stairs into Max’s den; a mock-up of his base­ment apart­ment, 40-watt light, bacon grease haze, green shag, and all. She snatched the dart as it flew by, flipped her wrist, and left the pro­jec­tile vibrat­ing in the oak frame of Max’s bed.

“I know you’re lone­ly, Max, and I know you blame me, but that hard­ly counts as a micro-aggres­sion.” Gina deliv­ered in her usu­al flat tone, eyes lev­el, unperturbed.

“Besides,” she con­tin­ued, “I’ve come to help.”

Two large men in black jump­suits began lug­ging crates down the steps.  As they start­ed unbox­ing equip­ment, Gina went on.

“I do under­stand, Max. I do. What do you think intel­li­gence train­ing at 14 was like for me?  That’s a bad time for a girl to be social­ly iso­lat­ed and run through abuse and defense train­ing.  It’s a bad time for a girl to be trained to sur­vive infil­trat­ing com­pa­nies of men who hate women.  But that’s not what you vol­un­teered for, Max. I just have to vet any­one who talks to you, and the list of can­di­dates your age or inter­ests for me to vet includes, well, no one.  I don’t have any­one I can get clear­ance for.  You’re a secret Max, one we nev­er expect­ed to have to keep this long, but you know why we do.  Not all of those acci­dents were hal­lu­ci­na­tions, Max. People got hurt.

“I final­ly found some­one who matched my cri­te­ria.  And Max, I’ve been look­ing for four years. I nev­er for­got what it was like to be alone, and I nev­er want­ed that for you.”

The men behind them flipped a switch, and a bank of screens turned on.  Some were tra­di­tion­al flat pan­el mon­i­tors, while oth­ers were the full height of the wall, maybe five by eight pan­els.  The young woman who appeared was stun­ning, with deep blue eyes set in dark skin, freck­les the col­or of choco­late chips sprin­kled over the bridge of her nose. She was firm and full in fea­ture, per­fect­ly con­toured to attract the eye, and Max was look­ing when she raised her eyes and met his gaze from the col­lec­tion of monitors.

“Is this a live feed?” He was startled.

“Max, this is Grace.  She’s Australian. Don’t be sur­prised if she calls you ‘mate’.” Gina grinned as Max blushed and turned from the screen.

“We haven’t got­ten audio yet,” Gina ges­tured toward a glow­ing key­board on Max’s desk, “but go ahead. She’s been wait­ing to meet you for months while we cleared her.  Gentlemen, you are dismissed.”

Gina’s tone soft­ened, and she returned her atten­tion to Max.

“You may both feel free to talk about any­thing you like.  Yes, I’ll be lis­ten­ing, but unless you threat­en self-harm, I don’t care what you say.  You’re right, I’m a dom­i­neer­ing, cranky, con­trary, bossy bitch most of the time.  There, I said it so you don’t have to.”

On the mon­i­tors, Grace made her way to her desk, where a cam­era fixed her face on Max’s desk monitors.

“Well,” Gina squint­ed at Max side­ways, “Get to it.  She’s not going to wait for­ev­er.  I’ll leave you two alone,” and she made her way back up the stairs.

Max looked at the girl for a long moment.  She looked so small, so far away, sit­ting at her desk on the large wall mon­i­tors, but her eyes plead­ed, wide and ques­tion­ing, from above his desk.  He slow­ly raised his hand from his hip, waved his fin­gers, and smiled sheepishly.

“Hello, Max. I’m Grace.” She typed.


The elec­tric cart stopped in front of a huge build­ing shaped like a chrome teardrop.  It was rough­ly three city blocks in diam­e­ter and came to a point at the apex of a ten-sto­ry arch. Godiya made an “X” with her fin­ger across the image, and the screen dis­ap­peared.  Jumping from the cart, she pressed her palm against the exte­ri­or, and a two-sto­ry hatch dis­solved into the floor. They wound through cor­ri­dors until she stopped in a cylin­dri­cal room where a four-foot-diam­e­ter glass tube stood, like obsid­i­an, from floor to ceil­ing in the cen­ter.  A round sur­face, per­fect­ly smooth, glowed with a deep-pur­ple lumi­nes­cence, encir­cling the cylinder. 

“The fact that we could wit­ness that scene means that Max’s design worked.  The sys­tem relayed the scene from a sim­u­lat­ed invis­i­ble hive in Max’s SIM real-time to our real equip­ment here, just like it would from a real hive in any phys­i­cal loca­tion on this planet.

“How did it feel to be a fly on the wall, Mr. Ramirez?  Next time, try the chair.  You can be a ghost.

“Say ‘Hello’, Remy.”

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Godiya pressed her hand to the sur­face encir­cling the obelisk.

“Say ‘Hello’ to who?” Remy asked.

“Say ‘Hello’ to the General Regenerative Agent Curating Education. She was how we put Max’s mem­o­ry back togeth­er each time Sidney killed him.”

A small pur­ple woman walked, glow­ing, from nowhere to stand her full five foot ten inch height inside the obsid­i­an tube.  Perfect in every detail, she turned to face Remy and fold­ed her hands behind her back.

“Hello, Mr. Ramirez. I’m Grace. I’m The Gibson.”

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