Anna: Palentine Park

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Estimated time to read:

6–9 minutes

This is the con­clu­sion of a sto­ry that began last week. If you have not read part one, you’ll want to do that before continuing.


The sky out­side was a grey veil of grit­ty mist with a scar­let ball flick­er­ing orange and yel­low fin­gers from its cen­ter that dripped a night­mare ver­sion of day­light across the city of Pharison.  The trees that had held the full peak of summer’s foliage now clung tena­cious­ly to a few stub­born leaves. Dust drift­ed and spun in eddies across the streets the made-up Jon’s mile and a half route home.

It was hard to breathe in this heat. Rivulets of per­spi­ra­tion ran in trails of dusty mud down Jon’s face leav­ing grimy streaks that dis­ap­peared below his mat­ted col­lar and con­gealed in dark splotch­es, stain­ing patch­es at the breast of his for­mer­ly pris­tine shirt.

On Oak Avenue Mrs. McMurtry, who had once called him the most worth­less­ly lazy man to ever hold a law degree because the firm was unable to shield her from the dam­ages she incurred when she cut the brake lines to her lover’s Jeep caus­ing an acci­dent that destroyed a shed full of tools and killed the dog that slept with­in, was nowhere to be found though the bat­tered screen door to her house stood open. The trunk of her Bronco stood unlatched where a sum­mer frock stretched, danc­ing in the scorch­ing wind from the hinge on which it was caught.

When Jon round­ed the cor­ner onto Maple Street, he saw that Jack’s bat­tered old Cobalt still sat rust­ing in the dri­ve­way.  Approaching the house, he found noth­ing but the inkwell to Jack’s quill set tipped over, oblit­er­at­ing the words of the title to the piece Jack was work­ing on. Notebook pages lay scat­tered across the wood­en porch.  Some of the pages were dark­ened, scorched around the edges and they crack­led and crunched as he stepped to exam­ine what appeared to be a fin­ger­print smudged in India ink on the han­dle to the front door.

Jon nev­er could fig­ure what Josey saw in that guy.  An unpub­lished writer, Jack just seemed to hov­er around the town lis­ten­ing to every­thing and prof­fer­ing noth­ing but fur­rowed brows over wast­ed paper in return.  He’d nev­er amount to any­thing, and Jon won­dered how he even afford­ed to stay at the old place on Maple, much less take Josey to din­ner . . . cer­tain­ly not in the style that a lawyer could.  Not in the way she deserved.  Nevertheless, he ham­mered, pant­i­ng on the doorframe.

“Jack! Hey! Jack! You in there?! You seein’ this outside?!”

There was no response but the crash­ing of the door against the coat tree as it swung too swift­ly open mak­ing Jon jump back star­tled. The house was neat­ly orga­nized and dec­o­rat­ed with a dis­tinct­ly min­i­mal­ist fla­vor where every­thing was in order, but for a blue table lamp lying shat­tered on the hard­wood floor next to the easy chair. No one was home. Terror crept into Jon’s heart, and he turned from the door­way, leapt from the porch, and start­ed run­ning in long des­per­ate strides toward his house at the cen­ter of town.

His daugh­ter was there with her nan­ny, in the house they had always lived at 1105 Main St. He and Margery had picked it out because the back yard faced Palentine Park on the bor­der of the town square.  They had thought that if they ever had chil­dren, it would be per­fect because when the kids were old enough, they could play by them­selves in the park while he or Marge looked on from the win­dows upstairs. 

It had been almost three years since Marge had left.  They had a fight.  They had words and then she just left, just packed a bag and van­ished.  Jon had only tak­en a day off work; his case load was heavy, the office was short-staffed, and he was low man on the totem pole.  He found Sarah, their nan­ny, the next day. Anna seemed to love her, and Sarah dot­ed on the child with bril­liant com­pas­sion.  They got on with their lives with very lit­tle men­tion of her miss­ing moth­er.  The police nev­er found any trace of Margery.  No for­ward­ing address was ever filed, no search ever showed her at anoth­er job or loca­tion.  Everyone came to assume she just changed her name and moved on.

Heat, raw and dry as a blow­torch, swept over him as he threw open the door to the three-sto­ry red-brick Victorian. The house was dark.  The cur­tains were drawn in the down­stairs rooms with the cool grey wall­pa­per, but the heat was sti­fling. Sarah’s hand­bag lay open mid­way up the stairs, and Jon leapt over tubes of lip­stick, eye­lin­er, blush, and gloss where they cas­cad­ed down the descend­ing steps.

“Sarah!  Anna!”

There was no response but heat and the tick­ing and crack­ing of the old house that it caused.  Then he heard it, faint at first, clap­ping . . . a lit­tle girl’s gig­gles . . . the sound of Anna’s music box pirou­et­ting its bal­le­ri­na above a mir­ror and its chime-strings. His breath came out all at once, a gust of relief.

“Anna! Oh, thank God! Anna! You’re ok!  Hang on, hon­ey.  Daddy’s com­ing.  We’ve got to leave, hon­ey! We’ve got to go right now!”

Jon ran to his bed­room and threw open the clos­et door.  The lights didn’t work so he turned on his cell phone’s torch and scanned over the menagerie of clut­ter in the small stor­age cub­by. Spare shoes, box­es from cus­tom tie tacks, cedar shoe stretch­ers, broom, dust­pan . . . there, the coral hard-shell suit­case that Marge had left behind.  Jon scooped up the suit­case lift­ing it off of the bro­ken brunette Barbie, whose legs and arms were twist­ed at odd angles, crushed beneath her col­lapsed doll-sized tool­shed. He began fling­ing ran­dom shirts, shorts, and under­things for he and Anna into the body of the clamshell before pil­ing tooth­paste tubes and brush­es on top and forc­ing it, with zip­pered lever­age, closed.  He round­ed the cor­ner from his bed­room, and at the thresh­old to his daughter’s play­room the world stopped.

Anna sat on her knees in the cen­ter of her play­room atop the four-by-eight hand drawn map of the city of Pharison that Jon had bought for her to play dolls on for her last birth­day. The girl bounced gig­gling, crouched on her calves and ankles, her long hair mat­ted and stick­ing in sweaty patch­es across her back and shoul­ders. Tiny doll shoes and clothes lay strewn in ran­dom scat­ter­ings across the map, the Barbie’s minute com­pacts, mir­rors, and lip­sticks sprin­kled reck­less­ly over the images of yards, streets, and buildings.

“Look Daddy! Look! Look what I made for you!”, squealed the lit­tle girl in delight.

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“I remem­bered Daddy! I remem­bered what you said about them! I remem­bered how they made you mad.  You said you hat­ed them.  How Josey wouldn’t smile at you.  How your boss­es were mean and didn’t like you.  How that man at work yelled at you all the time.  I remem­bered how that old man with the note­books wouldn’t keep to his place and let your girl­friend have you like she deserved.  I remem­bered how they all made you sad, Daddy, so I made you some­thing so you could be hap­py again!”

In the cen­ter of the room the lit­tle girl sat on the spot on the map that would have been their house. She had piled all of her dolls, boys and girls alike, in the space that would have been Palentine Park. They were wound with clear tape around a plas­tic Christmas tree, their hands and feet bound in bar­rettes and hair ties. In the lit­tle girl’s hand was a long wood­en match, it’s end a ball of red-orange fire.

“Anna! No!”

The lit­tle girl dropped the flam­ing end of the match onto the top of the plas­tic tree, and Jon heard screams erupt from the park out­side the sec­ond sto­ry win­dow.  Before he could make it to the win­dow to see what was hap­pen­ing in the park Jon heard Anna say, through thick lit­tle girl sobs.

“I remem­ber how they made you cry, Daddy . . . just like mom­my did.”

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