This is the conclusion of a two-part story. If you haven’t read part one, you’ll want to do that now: Welcome to Oddville (Part one).
“How are you feeling, Brayden? That’s a mighty good piece of pie, isn’t it?”
Brayden couldn’t answer. He noticed the other men standing up and surrounding him. He tried to cry out but his words seemed trapped. The world turned black.
Brayden’s eyes began to slowly open. The room was bright, but his eyesight was blurry. He could see the outline of a man standing above him and the silhouettes of several people around him. He shook his head to try and clear the disorientation. As his eyes adjusted, he realized that the figure standing above him was behind an altar. It was Jeremiah. Surrounding him, other members of the community stood stoic, all wearing long black robes. Brayden wanted to run, to scream, but his hands and feet were bound to a straight back chair and his mouth had been gagged. Jeremiah was noticing his panic.
“I see you are awake, evil one. Everyone! The evil one has awakened! Brayden Coldiron, you are being presented to the Redemption Road Church on the charge of practicing witchcraft. Brother Ezekiel will remove the gag from your mouth so that you may answer to these charges. There is no need to scream. No one will hear you. No one will come to your aid. Brother Ezekiel, please remove the cloth so that he may speak. Evil one, what say ye.”
Brayden was stunned. But, he knew he must remain calm if he was going to escape this insanity. He took a deep breath as Ezekiel removed the cloth from his mouth.
“Why are you charging me with witchcraft and why am I tied up? What is going on?!”
Jeremiah looked down at him, a smirk slowly spread on his face. “You are our prisoner, evil one. That is why you have been restrained. The charge of witchcraft has been assigned to you due to your heathen views of our Heavenly Father and the blasphemous garment you wear mocking the most holy cross.”
Brayden looked down at his t‑shirt with the white crosses, “With all due respect, Jeremiah…”
“REVEREND JEREMIAH!” He shouted down from the pulpit.
His booming voice startled Brayden, causing him to jump. This pleased the pastor.
“I apologize,” began Brayden. “With all due respect, Reverend Jeremiah, sir, this t‑shirt was never meant to offend you. It is only artwork from a music album. I am not a witch.”
“SILENCE! This is the devil’s artwork! God will decide your fate.” Jeremiah looked at the members of the congregation. “I hereby sentence this witch to a trial by swimming. That will reveal the truth, my brethren. Ezekiel! Malachi! Take this prisoner to the pond.”
The two stepped forward approaching Brayden. Malachi lifted him from underneath his arms and Ezekiel carried him by his feet. Brayden began fighting to get loose. He could feel the ropes loosening around his feet. Malachi spoke up.
“It is best if you do not resist. God will decide your fate. Resisting could determine that sooner.”
Brayden turned to look at Malachi who was looking straight ahead. Brayden decided to stop resisting and concentrate on the ropes inconspicuously. If anyone noticed that they were giving way, his chance for escape would be impossible. The two men sat the prisoner at the bank of the pond behind the church as the rest of the parishioners approached. Jeremiah stood next to Brayden and faced his flock.
“Brothers and Sisters, we are gathered here today in the presence of the Almighty God to decide the fate of this heathen witch. He has come to us by virtue of the demons of Hell wearing his garment of blasphemy into our fair town to spread his perversions, sinful acts, and evil spells. We will not have it! We shall allow our Father in Heaven to decide the fate of his soul. As I, your reverend, through the power of Jehovah, decree that the evil one shall be thrown into the deepest section of the pond, bound by his hands and feet. If he sinks, we the congregation, shall celebrate his innocence. If he floats, we shall know he is a witch sent here by SATAN!”
The crowd cheered. Brayden looked at Jeremiah. “If I am innocent I will be dead.”
Jeremiah looked at him, a snarl slowly coming across his face. “Ah, my lost sheep. If you are innocent, you will have the chance to meet Jesus this day. What a glorious day that will be!”
Brayden was stunned. He had been slowly and methodically working his way out of the rope. He knew he could survive this test he was as excellent swimmer. But getting away from this crowd felt hopeless. He must wait for the perfect opportunity. He had no idea where his car was. He would run if he had to. This was not how he was going to die…not today.
Jeremiah turned to Ezekiel and Malachi. “Take the prisoner to the center of the pond and let us watch Hell swallow him up.”
Jeremiah’s henchmen did his bidding picking Brayden up off of the ground and placing him in a small boat. Entering the boat on each end they rowed to the center of the pond.
Malachi made eye contact with Brayden for the first time.
“May God have mercy on your soul.”
The men stood, struggling to balance the boat as it rocked back and forth. They hefted Brayden swinging him into the cold water. Brayden gulped a last lung full of air as he splashed into the murky depths. Concentrating hard, he reached down toward his ankles, finishing his work on loosening the rope around them. The rope slid off, slowly falling below him. He was running out of time, but for his plan to work, he had to make sure he could free his hands. The desperation to breathe was closing in. His chest began to ache. As he felt the rope around his wrists loosen enough for them to move freely, he desperately kicked toward the surface. Violently breaking through the surface, Brayden inhaled an enormous gasp of glorious air. He allowed his body to float as he regained his strength. The congregation was shocked. Brayden could hear the loud murmuring and stirring as Jeremiah shouted.
“Witch!! Get him! He shall burn at the stake!”
Brayden could see Ezekiel and Malachi rowing toward him and the crowd running toward the opposite side of the pond where a large stake stood. He was to be burned there! As the boat floated closer, Brayden freed his wrists, took in a deep breath, and dived underwater. He swam deep enough that the onlookers could not see the direction he was going. He would not be able to take a breath until he reached the shore. The muddy water offered zero visibility making it disorienting.
Concentration was essential…concentration and hope. Brayden could feel the bottom of the pond. He was nearing the edge. Slowly he maneuvered his way to the surface for air and perspective. As quietly as he was able, he resurfaced, looking around at where he was located. Exactly as he had hoped, the crowd was scurrying to find him on the other side.
Ezekiel and Malachi had jumped in attempting to recover the body.
Brayden slowly and quietly inched his way to the edge, hauling his tired body out of the water. There was no time for rest. He ran as fast as he could toward the road in front of the church. Behind him, he could hear that he had been discovered.
“There he is! He is getting away!”
Jeremiah’s voice could be heard above them all.
“Get the witch! He must die!”
Brayden ran past the church and turned onto the highway. He ran as fast as his legs could carry him. He did not dare look behind him for fear that he would realize his plans were failing. In the distance, he could see his car! Escape was so close! He had almost no gas and hoped that the keys were still in the ignition. Reaching his car, he flung open the door and quickly got in locking the door behind him. The keys dangled in the ignition. Turning the key, the engine started with the fuel light shining brightly. The mob was merely yards away. Throwing it in reverse, he peeled out from Jeremiah’s shop with gravel flying. He gunned the gas and decided that he would go as far down the highway as his car would take him. Looking in the rearview mirror, the crowd was sinking farther and farther away. There were no other cars on the road as Brayden drove nearly 100 mph on the curvy highway. If he just kept following this path, it would have to lead him to the next town.
In the distance, Brayden spotted a stoplight. He was free! Oddville would never have a stoplight. He looked in the rearview mirror again. There was nothing. Tears filled his eyes as he allowed himself to let the relief wash over him. He eased off the gas and could see a gas station ahead. A police cruiser was parked next to a car with the hood up.
The police officer was talking to the person working on the car. Brayden could ask them for help! He pulled up to the two vehicles.
“Officer! Please help me! I just came from this church in Oddville. They tried to drown me in a pond claiming I was a witch! I’m not sure what or who they were…maybe a cult, I don’t know…”
The officer was listening intently, “Hold on there, slow down. A cult?
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Oddville?”
“Yes, sir. Oddville the town up the road, about fifteen miles that way.” Brayden pointed in the direction that he had come.
“The only town that way is Olive Branch.” The officer turned to the person working on the car. “Jerry, have you ever heard of a town called Oddville??”
Brayden froze. From behind the hood stepped a pleasant-looking man with a round face and gray beard. He was wiping his hands on a rag. He looked at Brayden as a grin came across his face.
“No, sir. I can’t say that I have…”

